You are never fully forgotten; nor shall you be forgotten in my eyes. Everything was silenced at one point, but that doesn't mean I am not here.. I shall always stand here, awaiting your call of closeness.
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You are never fully forgotten; nor shall you be forgotten in my eyes. Everything was silenced at one point, but that doesn't mean I am not here.. I shall always stand here, awaiting your call of closeness.
Galneda
capitalize the I in "but why I feel"
Breathe instead of breath
Tears instead of water
misspelled "reason", "because", "forgotten", and "absolutely"
Next is to give it a title, and keep churning out poetry! :D
evilblackcat13
aww.. thanks.. and yes.. sorry i a make alot of mistakes