Entry #3

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2011-07-27 14:23:47 by evilblackcat13

I feel...
I breath...
But why i feel...
Water out of my eyes...
No friends...
No nothing...
Fake feelings created by others makes me feel ...
so cold...always dripping...
there's always a reson for them ...
I bet they're grinning when they give them...
beause of my foolishness...
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I know now that i'm forgoten by apsoluty everyone....


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PhobotechPhobotech

2011-07-27 18:03:59

capitalize the I in "but why I feel"
Breathe instead of breath
Tears instead of water
misspelled "reason", "because", "forgotten", and "absolutely"

Next is to give it a title, and keep churning out poetry! :D

evilblackcat13 responds:

aww.. thanks.. and yes.. sorry i a make alot of mistakes


FolfehFolfeh

2011-08-22 19:24:46

You are never fully forgotten; nor shall you be forgotten in my eyes. Everything was silenced at one point, but that doesn't mean I am not here.. I shall always stand here, awaiting your call of closeness.